Physical Activity And The Outdoors.
In term 1 2013 I paired up with Damian, Milly and Caitlin from Rimu House. We started of just playing volleyball for fun, none of had ever played volleyball for a team before. Our very first game was against the other Rimu Team, We ended up beating them 86-48. We ended up winning all of our games until we came up against a Kahikatea team which was the closet out of all our games. We were told to look at the notice board outside the sports office at lunchtime to see if our team had made it to a final. We looked at the notice board and we saw our name the (FLAGS) in the grand final. This came as a big surprise to us because we never thought we would make it any were near here. This was even closer than the Kahikatea game. But we ended up winning the whole competition.
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Congratulations on winning the league, Ben! You've written a good recount here. You could still write more though - have a think about what other headings you could include e.g. best game, how we picked our team name etc. You also have a number of proof reading errors such as 'the over Rimu team'