I am a Year 8 student at Tauranga Intermediate School in New Zealand. I am in Rm42 and my teacher is Miss Campbell.
It was good how you said how to resist the temptation but you missed one of the main points. The Stanford Marshmallow Experiment. It's good how you said it can help you in life but you didn't explain why they are better in school and stuff.Damian :)
Much much better Ben. You did research and understand this topic. You wrote in your own words. Well done. Remember your capital letters.
It was good how you said how to resist the temptation but you missed one of the main points. The Stanford Marshmallow Experiment. It's good how you said it can help you in life but you didn't explain why they are better in school and stuff.
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Much much better Ben. You did research and understand this topic. You wrote in your own words. Well done. Remember your capital letters.
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